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It lost SOOO much detail in the taking of the picture. The shading of the face needs some work. A lot actually.

tools:

4B Pencil
Kneaded Eraser
Paper Stump
Pink Eraser
Toilet paper
Mead Sketch Paper
2B Mechanical Pencil HB Mechanical Pencil
(Thank you to ~JOKERSHADOW666 for noticing my pencil mess up :P)

Reference Image:
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Image size
2389x1631px 2.81 MB
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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Very nice work!
I especially like the detail in the iris, very realistic.

Like you said, the shading could use some work. But the photo could have influenced how it looks here. It also lacks some of the "wetness" that eyes have, try using multiple highlights of varying sizes. And keep an eye (no pun intended <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt=";)" title=";) (Wink)"/>) on what is reflected in the eye, usually there are lots of different shaded/colored areas of reflection on an eye. This also helps a great deal with realism.
The eyelashes look a little stiff and maybe on the thick side. Try drawing them a little thinner.

Overall, very nice artwork that shows a lot of talent and potential!